Hirudegarn Moveset

[camarinox]

Hirudegarn

Stalker Mist Transforms the user into a cloud of smoke, that travels behind the enemy to regain the users form. Hell's Firestorm User throws flames from the mouth as a flamethrower. Harpoon Executioner Activated by grapple. User stretches out his tail to capture the opponent with the far end. User drains the Opponent's HP over time. Move ends after 10 seconds or by losing the struggle.. Evolution User skin Becomes a cocoon, to reveal after a fearsome stronger monster (Transforms into full powered Hirudegarn). Moth Wings Gives the user the ability to Fly to Hirudegarn's Evolution, and increases speed by 10% Hoi's intervention Instantly regains conscience after being hit with a stun or other effect. Feral howl Taunts now increase stats by 20%, lasts 10 seconds Animal Rage Boosts user attack and defence by 2% after each successful special combo, or stage destruction, to a total of 30% max. Insect carapace Color scheme as seen in the movie. Scorpion Slicer [], Up+∆, Down+∆, R1 (User lifts its tail and smashes it like an Scorpion Sting on the ground)

[Kamiccolo33]

Nice, I think it's really good. Just some suggestions and pointer however:

Vanishing Cloud could probably do with a 2 Ki Cost perhaps, I don't know. Could it perhaps be changed to sound more evil, like Devilish Cloud, or Devilish Mist? Black Cloud? Something like that?

How do you feel about his Feral Howl becoming a support item that causes his taunts (which would be a loud roar) to raise his stats by 20% for 10 seconds?

Shouldn't the transformed Hirudigarn be able to fly to start off with?

Since we already have the name "Hio's Support" as a generic capsule, we'll need to change the name to something like "Hoi's Command" or something of that effect. I like the idea of stunning attacks having shortened effetcs on him. When you say instantly regains conscience, do you mean that for instance if somebody uses a stunning ability he breaks free pretty much instantly?

I like Animal Rage, though better have a cap on it for instance: "Boosts user attack and defence by 2% after each successful special combo, or stage destruction. A maximum of 30% total.

I was probably a bit picky, but his ability names just need to sound a bit more dark and evil seeing how he is an awakened monster conjured by evil magicians.

Oh, I almost forgot! Do you remember when he picked up stuff with his tail (in first form I think) and those stringy things shot out the end and absorbed energy? Perhaps that could be added too.

[camarinox]

Made some changes.

I dindt like the name "vanishing cloud" either. But as he uses it a lot in the movie, Im no too su sure of making it a 2 Ki bar move.

Howl ability changed to Support.

SInce he cant fly on his "first form" on the movie, I made the capsule to give the abilty of flying to the transformation of hirudegarn from the instant it transforms (I changet the description, and also added a boost of speed to be more close to the movie).

Changed the name of the Hoi's capsule.

Limited the "Animal Rage " capsule.

Have to go for now. I will check on your idea of the new tai move tomorrow, sounds good!!.

[Kamiccolo33]

Cool! I love the name "Stalker Mist", I guess we can leave that ability where it is at then. I'm sure the fatigue rising will cause them to stop using it all the time anyhow. I love him, especially his Scorpion Tail Special Combo.

I guess without the Moth Wings his second form can keep the wings close in their cases.

[camarinox]

Cool! I love the name "Stalker Mist", I guess we can leave that ability where it is at then. I'm sure the fatigue rising will cause them to stop using it all the time anyhow. I love him, especially his Scorpion Tail Special Combo.

Yep, the fatigue will stop the spamming of this move, or at least thats the idea.

I guess without the Moth Wings his second form can keep the wings close in their cases.

Exactly.

And what about his other move?

Stinger
Activated by grapple. User stretches out his tail to capture the opponent with the far end. Opponent takes damage over time. Move ends after 10 seconds or by losing the struggle.

[Kamiccolo33]

That's cool. I like it very much . Just a question, perhaps the flamethrower breath and stinger could have some awesome names like you came up with Stalker Mist? You know how a lot of character's ability names relate to each other in some way?

[Bubbles]

shouldn't that stalker mist be like an instant transmition type thing? and he should have something like he lifs his tail over his head and attacks the enemy with it, it should be a long range attack. And maybe like a mouth beam or something.

[camarinox]

shouldn't that stalker mist be like an instant transmition type thing? and he should have something like he lifs his tail over his head and attacks the enemy with it, it should be a long range attack. And maybe like a mouth beam or something.

That tail move you are talking about, its his special combo . I also tought at first about his "stalker mist", but after thinkin a while, its best to leave it as an ability, to prevent spaming. And mouth beam? He (or it) doesnt shoot beams, just his flamethrower breath .

That's cool. I like it very much . Just a question, perhaps the flamethrower breath and stinger could have some awesome names like you came up with Stalker Mist? You know how a lot of character's ability names relate to each other in some way?

Changed the names. What do you think?

[Kamiccolo33]

I love the names Camarinox! Great work! Tough Harpoon Executioner should probably require 2 Ki Bars as it does drain HP from the enemy.

[camarinox]

Thanks  .
CHanged to 2 ki bars.

[Kamiccolo33]

I think he's ready to add . Should we bother about his body being in half like in the movie? Or is it not important? Personally I don't think it would work if we tried

[camarinox]

I think he's ready to add . Should we bother about his body being in half like in the movie? Or is it not important? Personally I don't think it would work if we tried

Same here. I tried to think on some way of that that would work, but came to nothing. In my opinion its a little pointless, tough. it would be weird to control half a body.

[Kamiccolo33]

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